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Broken heart
Torn apart
Ripped to tiny pieces...

Love i gave
Now betrayed
Of all the things i needed...

Tears now stream
Haunt my dreams
Never give me peace...

Loneliness
Bitterness
Things aren't what they seem...

Hear your voice
My only choice
No more can i bear...

Take my life
Use the knife
No one will really care...

Feel insane
Love the pain
Content down to my core...

Left alone
On my own
You walked right out the door...

Now in pain
Left in shame
No reason to stay...

You're the knife
Took my life
Made me fade away...
©2004-2010 ~xZarielx
:iconxzarielx:

Author's Comments

the preview picture,done by the lovely amberxalert,was the inspiration for this poem. =D much love to teh amberness!! <3~!!! u loce tou@@@@ CF

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:icondeathflower:
Oh my mothafuckin' god! That was the shit, I loved it so much, I want to go write now... BTW that would make a great song.

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For all the killing I've done... I would rather die...
In fear of a better tomarrow.
:iconxzarielx:
lol,i'm glad you liked it,bob!!! long time no talk! and you do that,GO WRITE!!! i LOVE your poetry!! can't wait! and yes...it would make a good song. anyways,talk to ya later. much love! muah!

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"Never give it all,because nothing is what you'll have left."

~*~xZarielx~*~
:iconsilxy:
Wow I love this!! It's sooo...I don't know, it really conveys how I'm feeling right now.

Beautiful flow...Beautiful poem! hehe :glomp: Well done sweetie! :+fav:
:iconxzarielx:
well,thanks...i'm glad you like it!!! =D a lot of people don't like my writing. =P and i'm sorry you're feeling that way at the time. i hope things get better for you. sorry i didn't respond to your comment sooner,my computer crashed. ^^; and thanks for making it a fav!! :hug: ^-^

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"Never give it all,because nothing is what you'll have left."

~*~xZarielx~*~
:iconsilxy:
You're welcome. :D
:iconrabia:
holy smokes...
man u know u could be one of the best poets ive ever gone through.... but y dont u try somehting happy now?
for achange?

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Wouldn't hurt if you click [link]
:iconxzarielx:
nah,i don't think i'm good at writing...and i've tried writing happy stuff,but it isn't that good. i actually wasn't feeling very sad at all when i wrote this. my friend amber gave me the pic i used for the deviation and she looked so sad,so i wrote a sad poem. i donno if the poem fits the pic....but i hope it does!! xD and i'll try writing something happy'n put it up just for you,rabia. k? n.n :hug:

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"Never give it all,because nothing is what you'll have left."

~*~xZarielx~*~
:iconrabia:
Hmmm if this is the case then ill just put up my happy face picture so u write a happy poem k?

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Wouldn't hurt if you click [link]
:iconxzarielx:
lol,okie. siwwy rabia. =P

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"Never give it all,because nothing is what you'll have left."

~*~xZarielx~*~
:icondarknessupon:
beautyful flow..made my poetic vein pump!!! :) u inspire me truly

nice work :D

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Please take this
And run far away
Far away from me.
I am Tainted
The two of us
Were never meant to be
All these Pieces
And promises and left behinds
If only I could see
In my
Nothing
You meant everything
Everything to me


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